Not Now good job
You did a really good job linking events together. If it were a film I would say it was well edited and cinematic. However It was way too dramatic. I think you could have gotten your message across better with less blood and a little less repetition. I liked how the story kind of unfolds backwards but I think came back the same point too many times. There was some great symbolism but it needs subtlety. The drawing was much better in some places than others. If you could bring those sections up to the same level this would be more impactful. Overall good job.