A lot of hard work
Great job. I can see you put a lot of time into this one. The sound effects were particularly good and I loved your choice in music. Were those all independent/ amateur composers? They sounded pretty professional. You found some good ones. They really added a lot to the animation. The voicing got a little hard to follow but I think that was the point in some places. I think it was a little much. The animation was simple but had a lot of style so I liked it. I liked how random it was but I think it got too drawn out in places.
Thanks, keep it up.
You did a really good job linking events together. If it were a film I would say it was well edited and cinematic. However It was way too dramatic. I think you could have gotten your message across better with less blood and a little less repetition. I liked how the story kind of unfolds backwards but I think came back the same point too many times. There was some great symbolism but it needs subtlety. The drawing was much better in some places than others. If you could bring those sections up to the same level this would be more impactful. Overall good job.
Thanks! This review was actually quite helpful. You've got some good pointers there! I guess that some parts where a bit overdone or too extreme. I've experimentated alot with different techiques in this movie and that's the reason some parts came out better thne others.
Thanks for the review :)
I have always been a fan of this animation. Keep up the good work.
Very good movment thoughout the piece, very relaxing but still makes you want to dance. The ending was a little abrupt. This one sounds more composed than some of your other songs. I realy liked the variaty of drums you used but I think there were sections where one part of the drum set over powered the changes (ie the snare in the last section). Nice use of filters. Also I liked the varied instrument choices. Good job all together.
:) This song used in a submission. Yah!! Thanks for the review Dr-Zorrito. PM me whenever you make more songs. I blame my speakers for decieving my ears about the snare being too loud. Bah. Okay bye for now.
It's so nice to hear actual recordings. So much of the content out there consists of canned loops and over used sound bytes. In addition to that it was a realy exeptional track. I need to listen to the rest of your stuff.
Is that an Edgar Allen Poe reference?
I like the suspensefull moments you throw in there.
you throw alot of curves in there but it still loops well.
i'm really not sure where that description came from, so maybe!
yeh this is just kind of weird and underdeveloped. thanks for the review.
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